My Story is about Bob who grow up in Boston on counter earth. he's 21 years old. Bob lives in a Mansion which is huge and wide and is about 32 stories high. he lives in a city where some of the buildings are packed together. Some of the houses have gaps in between other houses and buildings. Everyone on counter Earth has a Mansion.
Thanks for posting, G. You did a good job setting up the character and setting, but what will the conflict in the story be; there needs to be a problem.
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